waking up in the morning looki
looking at my self
thinking what to do today
thinking about life my life
getting ready to go
to go fair away from life
fair away from my house
not to hair the people yelling
come home seat think
how to serve the next day in life
going to sleep and not waking up again
that's life one day alive and next died
so what is life to you
See my comment for the first poem.
ReplyDeleteMr. Shields
Spelling is important when you're dealing with writing in general but especially poetry. Besides that, I think this poem would be a good one to try some experiments with punctuation, form, or spacing. Keep going!!!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Mense